Editorial : The miles of trekking out of the wilderness past nothing but overgrown relics of the past and wildlife to talk to had not helped.
The "to talk to" does not match well with the overgrown relics. If you want to comment about him talking with the wildlife, consider making these two separate sentences/thoughts.
Editorial : The miles of trekking out of the wilderness past nothing but overgrown relics of the past and wildlife to talk to had not helped.
The "to talk to" does not match well with the overgrown relics. If you want to comment about him talking with the wildlife, consider making these two separate sentences/thoughts.
Consider: deepened her frown