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Her com beeped "How'd you get Hawkins... call me Rajim?"

"Ma'am, that is a secret... "

This part is very confusing. I can't follow who is talking, so I went back and forth trying to piece it together. I still can't figure it out. If Rejim is talking to Salindra, why the Ma'am? Wouldn't she be saying that to Rajim?

So far, I'm enjoying the story line. Most of it makes sense, but there's a few things that aren't clear. And one sentence that needs some editing--wrong words which are harder to find than misspelled ones, but I can't remember where. I was resting while reading!

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