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Anthony Diastello's avatar

“Oh, I don’t plan more 100-mile hikes for a while.”

Consider "plan on any more"

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Anthony Diastello's avatar

but I am sure you are right.

The way you have this character speak, the contraction, "you're" would feel more natural.

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