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Thanks for letting me read this!

It is certainly interesting. You have a good hook!

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plane blew up into a million pieces five months ago

It feels odd thst the doctor uses his exact words from his conversation with the secretary.

“My brain is still trying to digest things. I should be dead. I did not eject from a plane that is in a million pieces. I am sure I didn’t.”

And she had said the memorial was five months ago. Would there be a delay? Might the memorial have been only 4 months ago?

But if it is incidental the doctor saying "a million pieces" then maybe don't give him the exact words.

But if it is your intention that the doctor is using his exact words, maybe indicate that... whose plane blew into a 'million pieces' five months ago.

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